Winter Haiku 2
old tag jangles
against the new collar--
too much noise
* * *
pebbles of hail--
so much work for a big-eared dog
with a new collar
* * *
pebbles of hail--
so much work
for a big-eared dog
* * *
so much depends upon
a flourescent pink collar
in the suburbs
* * *
so much depends upon
a flourescent pink collar
in the suburban snow
* * *
so much depends upon
a hot pink collar
on a suburban bitch
(I thought it would be interesting to chart the evolution of Winter Haiku 3.)
against the new collar--
too much noise
* * *
pebbles of hail--
so much work for a big-eared dog
with a new collar
* * *
pebbles of hail--
so much work
for a big-eared dog
* * *
so much depends upon
a flourescent pink collar
in the suburbs
* * *
so much depends upon
a flourescent pink collar
in the suburban snow
* * *
so much depends upon
a hot pink collar
on a suburban bitch
(I thought it would be interesting to chart the evolution of Winter Haiku 3.)
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